3 Nov - task 2 essay - Agree or disagree



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Most people think modern games do not develop the skills of children. They claim that traditional games have more benefits on it.

Do you agree or disagree?


It is said by most that contemporary games do not contribute the development of children's abilities. In contrast, traditional games are considered to bring more benefits for children in some fields. I do completely accord with it because of learning processes and mental improvement.

To embark on, modern games are counted to be as home games. In the other words, they are usually played on electronic devices such as computers and smartphones. Playing modern games brings some benefits such as children computer skills enhancement that is much needed now. However, there are many children becoming addicted because they spend the most of their free time with playing computer games. The effect of this addiction is children do not want to interact with the environment because they play the games in front of the screen sitting for long time in their rooms. This is clearly dangerous for their mental health. Furthermore, modern games lead to obesity because of the short of physical activities.

Traditional games plays an important role in children health development because such games require physical activities. In this world, where children are facing competition in schools , entertainment is needed with studies. These traditional games give them some relaxation from their studies and it also helps in increasing wining attitude in children as well as it also helps in increasing cooperation which is crucial to communicate with other people in future. It also makes our mind fresh and ready to face any competition.

To conclude , traditional games are better for child development than modern games because children enjoy them and makes their mind fresh and their body healthy

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